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  OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 1:05:52 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: 1:09:10 pm on 10/16/2008
 
Well, folks, it's been a little slow recently, which I hope means that no one is having any problems.  But it's a little dull to check in on this forum and see nothing new, so here's my contribution--and my challenge:  Diaper-themed haiku.

Many of you know this, but haiki is an unrhymed Japanese verse form usually consisting of three lines and seventeen syllables, typically in a five-seven-five syllable division.  Traditionally, haiku evoke an emotion through strong imagery, typically of nature, but as those of you  who have weekly haiku contests in the paper or whatever know, you don't have to get too hung up on that when you're just having fun.  Enjoy each other's creativity!  Multiple contributions welcome . . .  
:-)

(and if someone feels led to create a limerick or sonnet, go for it!)
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 1:07:19 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
Dancing line of white
Gleams through shifting aspen leaves
Crisp drying diapers
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (wickenching)
Posted: 1:10:28 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
This is fun!  Thanks for starting it.  I too have been finding things slow....a good sign for everyone I guess!

Here is a little ditty I just wrote out:

Lovely cotton bum,
No more papery crinkles,
Oh, my healthy girl.

Let's have some more!
Brenda
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (Dimples)
Posted: 1:11:24 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
Ahem...

Selling sandys dipes
Sunshine bleaches stains so white
PayPal is my friend
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 1:20:02 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
Chicken legs kicking
Dirty diaper on carpet;
When is husband home?
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (Fanfreluche)
Posted: 4:29:13 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
Di'per fresh and new
Suddenly covered in stains...
Blueberries again!
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (nakedbabytoes)
Posted: 6:57:01 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
Crayon oh so blue
Bamboo diapers spotted too
Precious little boys!

terrible haiku but interesting weekend......
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 11:59:34 pm on 10/16/2008 Modified: Never
 
Inspired (using the term loosely) by my son's recent vegetarian mania:

Peach, plum, grape, pea, orange
So healthy but those curst skins
I will see again!
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 12:10:50 am on 10/17/2008 Modified: Never
 
(Don't worry, I won't quit the day job . . .)

There once was a mother in Wales
Who bought herself two diaper pails.
“Save the planet I must--
Use cloth diapers or bust!”
Now she scoffs at disposable sales.
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (sallyjean)
Posted: 8:42:49 pm on 10/19/2008 Modified: Never
 
Naked bum running
He dances in floor puddles
Pitter patter, splash!
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 11:01:13 pm on 10/19/2008 Modified: Never
 
I can just picture those dancing feet . . .
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (Fanfreluche)
Posted: 1:52:25 pm on 10/27/2008 Modified: Never
 
Wow, is it ever quiet! Is it that no one is having CD'd babies anymore, or that the diapers are so wonderful that no one has problems or questions? I hope it is the latter... But I was used to reading the forum when I needed a break at work (!?!) and I miss it!
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 3:46:22 pm on 10/27/2008 Modified: Never
 
I know, sigh . . .

I'm still waiting for someone to write a diaper sonnet!  :-)
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (Fanfreluche)
Posted: 5:17:53 pm on 10/27/2008 Modified: Never
 
Ok, then, here I go... At least I think it's a sonnet:

Once upon a time, a mother-to-be
Was told of something called cloth diapers
And once she had heard how nice it could be
She closed her ears to all social dampers

She welcomed her son on a summer day
She diapered him in fabric aglow
And from that moment there was just no way
That she would look back to the paper foe

He son was happy, his skin was healthy
The landfill was spared a great deal of pain
And to those who thought it would be messy
She showed their worries had all been in vain

There goes the story of a happy mum
Who found her solace in a bamboo bum
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (aavt)
Posted: 9:56:54 pm on 10/27/2008 Modified: Never
 
Oh la la!  I'm going to have to start thinking in iambic pentameter.  Hmmmmm.
  Re: OT--Time for Diaper Haiku!!! (KarenC)
Posted: 3:25:24 pm on 10/28/2008 Modified: Never
 

Ok, you guys are giving me serious high school english class flashbacks!! LOL! Very cool though, keep it up!

Karen.

 

 
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